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Re: Kelly's page



At 11:19 PM 4/12/96, Timothy van der Linden wrote:
>Hi Kelly,
>
>Well it is my turn, your pages are a bit more extensive, so I may not have
>covered everything.
>
>There are a lot of small esthetical flaws, here an extensive survey. (Sorry,
>once I started, I couldn't stop).
>
>
>Several pages end abrupt, adding a horizontal bar or something like that may
>keep on from wondering if the document is incomplete.
>
>Several images (at the explorer page) have a blue-rectangle around them (a
>link), I wonder if that is necessary. (Maybe for old browsers, I really
>don't know) They suggest that clicking on them will reveal more information.
>
>You use a lot of <PRE>formatted-areas, they have the habit to be longer than
>the initial width of the window. Maybe decreasing the font (<FONT=-1>a bit
>or breaking the lines more often will keep one from needing to scroll aside.
>
>Your explorer class page has several chapters, you may want to add a table
>of contents at the top of the document with links to the top every part.
>
>The Explorer_Hab_Ring.JPG in crewquarters isn't the right size.
>
>While most images have a white background the documents have the original
>grey background. Your original explorer class page did have a white one.
>Another suggestion would be to make the images transparent
>
>Several tables are over the total width of the window, it doesn't look nice.
>Try removing the "WIDTH=100%" part in the TABLE.
>
>The tables in the food-number document are all in PREformatted text, this
>makes the tables unnecessary large.
>
>Some tables will look better if they the rows are centered <TR ALIGN=CENTER>
>
>The "Overview of all concepts" link in the Explorer class document isn't a
>relative but an absolute link.
>
>The "Explorer class starship design" link in Stardrives refers to the
>directory instead of the document (works though).
>
>The "Bussards Fusion reactor" in Stardrives doesn't work (can't find the page).
>
>The "internally fueled fusion rockets " in External_fueled is not complete
>"\stardrives" instead of "\stardrives.html"
>
>I'm not 100% but the "Vacuum landers" & "Aero landers" link in Manifest
>referring to "..\Support_Craft" do not work.
>
>The "Shuttle craft" link refers to the directory instead of the document
>(but works also).
>
>Next letter I'll comment about the content, but most seems OK.
>
>Timothy


Thanks for the input!  I'll fix it asap.

Kelly


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Kelly Starks                       Internet: kgstar@most.fw.hac.com
Sr. Systems Engineer
Magnavox Electronic Systems Company
(Magnavox URL: http://www.fw.hac.com/external.html)

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