Guidelines for Revision
Richard Lanham gives the following example in Revising Prose: Change: Central to our understanding of the
character of Lucrece in William Shakespeare's The Rape
of Lucrece is the long passage towards the end of the
poem devoted to a painting of the fall of Troy (9
prepositional phrases, weak to be verb, 35 words). |
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