A few tips on writing
Introduction: Make sure you have a short, clear
introductory paragraph that
lets the reader know what the paper is going to be about.
Signal the organization
of your paper. Use headings for different sections.
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to affect vs. to effect: This is a terribly
common mistake. The verb 'to effect'
is very formal and rarely used; it means 'to succeed
in causing something planned
to happen.' When students use 'to effect,' they almost
always have a meaning in mind
that is captured by the verb 'to affect': "The presence
of other people affects an
individual's performance." "She was strongly affected
by her recent life events."
The error comes from the fact that 'to effect' is synonymous
with the phrase 'something
has an effect on something else.' So don't use the verb
'to effect'---use 'to affect' or
'to have an effect.'
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Genitive ['s]: [singular] "My
mother's [not mothers] decision was difficult."
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Genitive [s']: [plural] "The mothers'
decision was difficult."
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Its vs. It's: For example,
"Its [not It's] most attractive feature is the price"
"It's [ it is] uncertain that it will rain."
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Gender-neutral language: To avoid the traditional
sexist use of "he," use one or
more of the following strategies: (a) alternate references
to male and female (e.g., if
you gave one example about a woman in one paragraph,
use an example about a
man in the next paragraph); (a) say "his or her" and
"he or she" (but don't use the
clumsy his/her or s/he); (c) use the plural form "people"
(but don't say "they" if you
refer to a single person).
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tenet vs. tenant: A tenet of a theory is a
major principle on which the theory is
based. Your tenant pays rent to you every month.
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A colon [:] introduces a closely related sentence
part (e.g., "He made one major
mistake: not to calculate the probabilities right").
The part after the colon can be
a complete or an incomplete sentence.
A semicolon [;] separates two sentence parts more
distinctly than a comma does
and less distinctly than a period ("She was not tired;
he was exhausted"). The part
after the semicolon must be a complete sentence.
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Plural words: "Phenomena" is a plural world--its singular
form is "phenomenon"
("These phenomena are intriguing"). The same holds
for "data," which is the plural
of "datum" ("The data do not confirm the hypothesis")
and "criteria," which is the
plural of "criterion" ("The criteria were set too high").
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Do not use definite articles for theories: "Dissonance
theory predicts that ..."
(NOT: "The dissonance theory") Same for attribution theory,
signal detection theory,
expected utility theory, prospect theory, etc. Note,
however, that psychological
processes or phenomena often do carry a definite article
(the fundamental attribution
error, the availability heuristic, etc.)
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Between and Among: Between
two items, persons, places, and among three
or more.
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People who, not people
that: people are not "thats". And
"couple is," not "couple are."