PIZZAZ!...DIAMANTE POEMS

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INFORMATION

ESL Student Level: High Beginner+
Description: Diamond-shaped poems with 7 lines. Incorporates oral, analytical thinking, reading and writing skills.
Sample Diamante:


Seasons
Written Collectively as a Class
(AEI-Creative Writing I)

Winter
Rainy, cold
Skiing, skating, sledding
Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean
Swimming, surfing, scuba diving
Sunny, hot
Summer



WARM-UP ACTIVITIES

Link the diamante poems to events or experiences such as a nature walk just off campus, closure for a certain class activity/unit,an end-of-term remembrance, etc.

Briefly examine structured forms of poetry from students' native languages as an introduction, e.g. Haiku poetry from Japanese.

Make up your own examples, using simpler or more complex vocabulary/topics, to tailor this activity to your particular students' level.


INSTRUCTIONS

  1. Students work in small groups of 3-5. Each group has one example poem, and the tasks:
    a) Identify the structure / form of the poem (what are the parts of speech in each line); and,
    b) Report orally and informally to the rest of the class on the feeling / tone of the poem.
    c) Answer the questions: What is the relationship between the first and last lines? What is the "middle" of the poem, and how can you tell?
    Students can use dictionaries, as necessary, to figure out unfamiliar words.

  2. Students report on their assigned poems. (Optional: students practice with the instructor orally beforehand and then read their assigned poem to the class.)
    The structural form is then written on the board or screen and/or presented on a handout. Example:

    Line 1: Winter = 1 NOUN-A
    Line 2: Rainy, cold = 2 ADJECTIVES-A
    Line 3: Skiing, skating, sledding = 3 GERUNDS-A (verb + -ing)
    Line 4: Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean = 2 NOUNS-A + 2 NOUNS-B
    Line 5: Swimming, surfing, scuba diving = 3 GERUNDS-B (verb + -ing)
    Line 6: Sunny, hot = 2 ADJECTIVES-B
    Line 7: Summer = 1 NOUN-B

  3. Students' observations regarding synonyms, parts of speech on each line, emotional tone, etc. are also discussed / outlined clearly.

  4. Individual groups then "brainstorm" as many possible pairs of synonyms as they can create. The teacher puts the pairs up on the board / overhead screen as suggestions (e.g. school days-holidays, woman-man, student-teacher, love-hatred, peace-war, divorce-marriage ......). Students can use a dictionary and/or thesaurus.

  5. Students and the instructor choose one of the brainstormed topics and write a cinquaine poem together on the board / overhead screen. Optional: copy it down and add it to the class collection if a class anthology is in the works.

  6. Working individually with a template (see sample below), students write one or more cinquaines on the subject(s) of their choice. (Poems can also be written or transferred onto a computer VIA a teacher-prepared template.)


SAMPLE POEMS


A pair of poems submitted by Edit Gonczy in Hungary:

Man-Woman #1
by Lukacs (male)

Man
Brilliant, perfect
Working, learning, earning
Beer, car, mirror, make-up
Speaking, speaking, speaking
Furious, exhausted
Woman

Man-Woman #2
by Bogi and Eszter (female)

Stupid, rude
Sleeping, eating
Trousers, underpants, knickers, skirts
Working, sporting
Clever, beautiful
Woman



Take your Time...
by Rosana Tellini


Vacation
Happy, fun
Sleeping, dancing, traveling
Liberty, car, beach, night
Exciting, interesting, moving
Unhappy, boring
Work



Studies
by Soo Young


Studies
Unhappy, difficult
Boring, succeeding, sleeping
Library, pencil, card, outside
Interesting, exciting, failing
Happy, easy
Play



Emotions
by Mooil



Love
Wonderful, beautiful
Caring, liking, thinking
Innocence, smile, tear, guilt
Fighting, violating, disgusting
Terrible, worst
Hatred



The Earth
by Ivan

Mountain
High, rocky
Flying, looking, killing
Eagle, power, fear, rabbit
Living, moving, making noise
Deep, beautiful
Valley



Ages
by Masato

Teenager
Powerful, noisy
Dancing, dating, consuming
Explosion, energetic, maturity, senility
Working, earning, saving
Quiet, peaceful
Ty-ager*

(* As in seventy, eighty)

Make up your own examples, using simpler or more complex vocabulary/topics, to tailor this activity to your particular students' level.



TEMPLATE



Title of Poem
Author's Name

_________________
_____________, ___________
_______________, ______________, _______________
_______________, ______________, _______________, _______________
_______________, ______________, _______________
_______________, _____________
__________________



FOLLOW-UP ACTIVITIES

  1. Students' work can be compiled into a class anthology for reading, autographing, souvenirs, and so on.
  2. Illustrate poems with handrawn or computer-generated images.


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Leslie Opp-Beckman, Technology Coordinator and ESL Instructor
E-mail: leslieob@uoregon.edu
5212 University of Oregon, American English Institute
Eugene, Oregon 97403-5212 USA
Leslie Opp-Beckman, copyright 1994-2003. Permission to copy and distribute for in-class, non-profit use only.
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This page last updated: 13 August 2003