
Hi Elaine and Peter-
When I read the Module with extra care last night, I discovered two grrammatical errors that need to be corrected. Both are in the sentence under "Guidelines" that begins "All courses must..."
1. the word "have" after "must" should be replaced with "be passed with" since courses don't really have things. This is something we agreed to change during the JBAC discussion, but the change got lost somewhere along the line. Maybe I failed to send it to you on Thursday evening, Elaine.
2. the word "and" should replace the comma between "better" and "must be". This sentence was shortened from the original, which contained a third clause that was preceded by an "and".
Can you make these changes? They are purely cosmetic, but I think we want the text to be blemish-free.
-Karen
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