Warm-Up Activities
Link the diamante poems to events or experiences
such as a
nature walk just off campus, closure for a certain class activity/unit,an
end-of-term remembrance, etc.
Briefly examine structured forms of poetry from
students' native languages as an introduction, e.g. Haiku poetry from
Japanese.
Make up your own examples, using simpler or more complex
vocabulary/topics,
to tailor this activity to your particular students' level.
Instructions
- Students work in small groups of 3-5. Each group has one example
poem, and the tasks:
a) Identify the structure / form of the poem (what are the parts of
speech in each line); and,
b) Report orally and informally to the rest of the class on the
feeling / tone of the poem.
c) Answer the questions: What is the relationship between the first
and
last lines? What is the "middle" of the poem (the transition point), and how can you tell?
Students can use dictionaries, as necessary, to figure out
unfamiliar
words. Example diamante poem:
Title of Poem:
Author of Poem: |
Seasons
All-Class Poem, AEI-Creative Writing I |
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Parts of Speech: |
Line 1: |
Winter |
= 1 noun. The topic or theme of the poem (and, the opposite of line 8). |
Line 2: |
Rainy, cold |
= 2 adjectives. They describe the noun in line 1. |
Line 3: |
Skiing, skating, sledding |
= 3 gerunds (verb + ing). They describe the noun in line 1. |
Line 4: |
Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean |
= 4 nouns: two nouns related to line 1 and two nounsrelated to line 8. |
Line 5: |
Swimming, surfing, scuba diving |
= 3 gerunds (verb + ing). They describe the noun in line 8.. |
Line 6: |
Sunny, hot |
= 2 adjectives. They describe the noun in line 8. |
Line 7: |
Summer |
= 1 noun. This is an antonym (opposite) for the noun in line 1. |
- Students report on their assigned poems. Optional: students
can practice with the instructor orally beforehand and then read and/or act out their
assigned poem to the class.
- Individual groups then "brainstorm" as many possible pairs of
antonyms
as they can create. The teacher puts the pairs up on the board /
overhead
screen as suggestions (e.g. school days-holidays,
woman-man, student-teacher, love-hatred, peace-war, divorce-marriage...). Students can use a dictionary and/or thesaurus.
- Students and the instructor choose one of the brainstormed
topics and
write a diamante poem together on the board / overhead screen.
Optional:
copy it down and add it to the class collection if a class anthology is
in
the works.
- Working individually with a template (see example below),
students
write one or more diamantes on the subject(s) of their choice.
More Example Poems
Adult intermediate-level ESOL students at University of Oregon authored the example cinquain poems below. Instructors can make their own examples as well, using simpler or more complex
vocabulary and topics,
to tailor this activity to students' language proficiency level and interests.
Man-Woman #1
by Lukacs (male)
Man
Brilliant, perfect
Working, learning, earning
Beer, car, mirror, make-up
Speaking, speaking, speaking
Furious, exhausted
Woman |
Man-Woman #2
by Bogi and Eszter (female)
Man
Stupid, rude
Sleeping, eating
Trousers, underpants, knickers, skirts
Working, sporting
Clever, beautiful
Woman |
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Take your Time...
by Rosana Tellini
Vacation
Happy, fun
Sleeping, dancing, traveling
Liberty, car, beach, night
Exciting, interesting, moving
Unhappy, boring
Work |
Studies
by Soo Young
Studies
Unhappy, difficult
Boring, succeeding, sleeping
Library, pencil, card, outside
Interesting, exciting, failing
Happy, easy
Play |
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Emotions
by Mooil
Love
Wonderful, beautiful
Caring, liking, thinking
Innocence, smile, tear, guilt
Fighting, violating, disgusting
Terrible, worst
Hatred |
The Earth
by Ivan
Mountain
High, rocky
Flying, looking, killing
Eagle, power, fear, rabbit
Living, moving, making noise
Deep, beautiful
Valley |
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Ages
by Masato
Teenager
Powerful, noisy
Dancing, dating, consuming
Explosion, energy, maturity, senility
Working, earning, saving
Quiet, peaceful
Ty-ager*
(* As in seventy, eighty) |
Make up your own examples, using simpler or more complex
vocabulary/topics, to tailor this activity to your particular students'
level. |
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Template
Title of Poem |
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Author's Name |
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______________________ |
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= 1 noun ("top") |
______________________, ______________________ |
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= 2 adjectivesfor top noun |
__________________, __________________, __________________ |
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= 3 gerunds for top noun |
__________________, __________________, __________________ , __________________ |
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= 4 synonyms:
2 for top noun + 2 for bottom noun |
__________________, __________________, __________________
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= 3 gerunds for bottom noun |
______________________, ______________________ |
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= 2 adjectives for bottom noun |
______________________ |
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= 1 noun ("bottom") |
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FOLLOW-UP ACTIVITIES
- Students' work can be compiled into a class anthology for reading,
autographing, souvenirs, and so on.
- Illustrate poems with handrawn or computer-generated images.
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